Remembered

Remembered

A Poem by Neville
"

it probably aint what you think

"

Remembered

 

Tonight will be magnificent

Just you wait and see

Thank you for waiting for me baby

In a moment shared tho’

We shall both be overcome, so

Take a deep breath in and sigh out slow

A moment more and they were

Well and truly gone, yet the legend

Of their love affair goes on and on and on..

 

© 2021 Neville


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All night, I've been thinking about writing a poem of love/physical attraction, so what better place to prime my pump than to read you over my first cup of coffee? You hold the magic of painting a sexy situation subtly, alluding to hidden passions, & this is exactly what I hope to do in an upcoming poem (((SAUCE))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago


I do not deserve the honour you have just bestowed upon me ... but do I like it ... Hell yea.. read more



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just like Romeo and Juliet....
intensity overcomes...but legendary.
j.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Days Ago


............. cor blimey guv'nor how kind is that .. too kind sir n that's a fact ... Cheers.. read more
every couple in love are special, their love is special, they feel it that way, and know they don't need to be any other legendary couple to be special, they are legend in their own way ;) and why I'm feeling that the moment You are speaking of here is that "moment of poerty"? You seem to write of passion lately... I love that ❤️

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Days Ago


.......... the old fella tries hard and thanks you my friend for noticing ...
Ah, Romeo and Julie would be far more widely read if you were put in charge of reworking em mate 😊

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago


................... You spoil me mate, so ya do .. and wot a crackin avatar Loz I must say ... read more
Lorry

1 Week Ago

Cheers. It's just left of the brig (brig a doon) 😊
Neville

1 Week Ago


.............. pon my word, all the way doon there up there .. my fine brigadier ..
Well I didn't see a lovein here Neville. I'm afraid I saw something disturbing. Flashing before these eyes of mine a double suicide pact. Carbon monoxide poisoning. I saw them together huddled in each others arms in a car, parked in the country. Yes for those who found them and those who loved them they will be remembered for a long time. Sometimes my imagination gets the better of me.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago


............ opaque maybe
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Week Ago

I'm gonna settle for translucent. Taking the middle ground...........
Neville

1 Week Ago


............ meeting me half way is most acceptable
Your emotions are strongly reflected through your words .... And seems that you are in love or something ... Just Kidding .... 😊 but a lovely piece

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago


................ maybe something .. maybe .. thank you for checking in and making me smile :.. read more
All night, I've been thinking about writing a poem of love/physical attraction, so what better place to prime my pump than to read you over my first cup of coffee? You hold the magic of painting a sexy situation subtly, alluding to hidden passions, & this is exactly what I hope to do in an upcoming poem (((SAUCE))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago


I do not deserve the honour you have just bestowed upon me ... but do I like it ... Hell yea.. read more

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Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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