Remembered

it probably aint what you think

Remembered

 

Tonight will be magnificent

Just you wait and see

Thank you for waiting for me baby

…

In a moment shared tho’

We shall both be overcome, so

Take a deep breath in and sigh out slow

…

A moment more and they were

Well and truly gone, yet the legend

Of their love affair goes on and on and on..

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

All night, I've been thinking about writing a poem of love/physical attraction, so what better place to prime my pump than to read you over my first cup of coffee? You hold the magic of painting a sexy situation subtly, alluding to hidden passions, & this is exactly what I hope to do in an upcoming poem (((SAUCE))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

I do not deserve the honour you have just bestowed upon me ... but do I like it ... Hell yeah, you bet 'cha boobies .......... (CUPS) gently :) Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

just like Romeo and Juliet....
intensity overcomes...but legendary.
j.

[Neville]

............. cor blimey guv'nor how kind is that .. too kind sir n that's a fact ... Cheers jacob ..

N.

[lightsong]

every couple in love are special, their love is special, they feel it that way, and know they don't need to be any other legendary couple to be special, they are legend in their own way ;) and why I'm feeling that the moment You are speaking of here is that "moment of poerty"? You seem to write of passion lately... I love that ❤️

[Neville]

.......... the old fella tries hard and thanks you my friend for noticing ...

[Lorry]

Ah, Romeo and Julie would be far more widely read if you were put in charge of reworking em mate 😊

[Neville]

................... You spoil me mate, so ya do .. and wot a crackin avatar Loz I must say ........ 😊

[Lorry]

Cheers. It's just left of the brig (brig a doon) 😊

[Neville]

.............. pon my word, all the way doon there up there .. my fine brigadier ..

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Well I didn't see a lovein here Neville. I'm afraid I saw something disturbing. Flashing before these eyes of mine a double suicide pact. Carbon monoxide poisoning. I saw them together huddled in each others arms in a car, parked in the country. Yes for those who found them and those who loved them they will be remembered for a long time. Sometimes my imagination gets the better of me.

Chris

[Neville]

......... it seems you can read write through me ...

Neville

[Christine Anne Shaw]

You are very good at directing a reader's thoughts down a certain path. I had an instant flash of Plath before it turned into what I ended up with. Transparent though, you are not:)

Chris

[Neville]

............ opaque maybe

[Christine Anne Shaw]

I'm gonna settle for translucent. Taking the middle ground...........

[Neville]

............ meeting me half way is most acceptable

[Anushka joshi]

Your emotions are strongly reflected through your words .... And seems that you are in love or something ... Just Kidding .... 😊 but a lovely piece

[Neville]

................ maybe something .. maybe .. thank you for checking in and making me smile :)