Quaffed

Quaffed

A Poem by Neville

Quaffed

 

I am a guilty secret


Your poison slowly sipped


The elusive aftertaste you crave


Residing on your lips

 

© 2021 Neville


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almost like a 4 line conversation...she: lines 1 and 3.
He: lines 2 and 4...
deadly.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


............. that's one way of looking at it .. cheers jacob :)

N.
Toxic maybe but I like secrets when aftertastes stay 'til next time waiting lips are smothered with kisses..........well we can at least dream ........x

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Neville

1 Month Ago


there's nowt wrong with dreaming Fay .. I do it all the time ..........
:)
I like this. It is short and sweet and had a nice mystery to it. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Neville

1 Month Ago


..... thank you Danny M .. that'll do nicely sir ....
Very well written and expressed, this has an amazing flow to it

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Neville

1 Month Ago


thank you kindly and true my friend .. much appreciated :)
Anything using a word like 'quaffed' has to be similar to one of Chaucer's tales. So, from now on will call you Geoff, you sauce-pot!


Posted 1 Month Ago


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Neville

1 Month Ago


.... I have been called a lot of things before .. Geoff aint one of them, till now .. but I .. read more
emmajoy

1 Month Ago

Remember scene in The Knight's Tale?
Neville

1 Month Ago


... the old uns are the best uns aint they just :)
My first experience of being "quaffed" in this way, I was about 15 & he was 18-ish. He was always chewing cinnamon gum & ever since, I've equated cinnamon-on-the-breath with other aspects of having been so near his lips *sigh* Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Neville

1 Month Ago


......... I know that cinnamon gum .. cheers BG :) deep sigh.. fondly .. Neville
Most people might think this is about a secret drinker. I am not most people. This appears to be about something far more interesting. Sensual as well as secretive. Clever brevity and red hot with it.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


.............. Now aint that just me thank you Chris ..

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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