Your title is so evocative of all the ways a collection of slumbers can heal. Your poem tiptoes thru the most delicate balance between cherishing memories & yet keeping them in a safe place where we won't dwell on them. Removing your poem from the realm of romance, this is an exquisite metaphor for how it feels when all the painful stuff is healed, but not forsaken (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
..... that insight you got is well worth holding onto Margie .. thank you for encouraging me.. read more
..... that insight you got is well worth holding onto Margie .. thank you for encouraging me ... (KEEPS) always, Neville
Treasured artifact from books or something that reminds us of a past lover tucked away safely until we need to feel their warmth. Great visuals and very true.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
thank you kindly and true PB .. a much appreciated visit ...
With a collection of slumbers hidden away ~ valued, guarded, cherished and all.. there's that special knowledge that it will never hurt you by fading or crumbling, Those slumbers are loved. Beautiful.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
it takes a lot to make this old fella smile these days .. but you can bet ya boots.. write n.. read more
it takes a lot to make this old fella smile these days .. but you can bet ya boots.. write now I am smiling .. thank you emmajoy n truly :)
That place of yesterday's, where the mind travels when it is restless. When it can't sleep and those treasures take on a new shine and you just have to get them out. Hold them in your hands, touch them, smell them, read them, run your finger tips over the writing and smile. They may not exist physically, they may be of a different time, they may be of people passed but they are gold dust. In the mind or like some of mine in my lingerie drawer, they are gold dust. Treasure to me, while of no value to many. I really like this poem.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
....... thank you Chris for this encouraging & otherwise heart-warming review comment .. read more
....... thank you Chris for this encouraging & otherwise heart-warming review comment ..
Your title is so evocative of all the ways a collection of slumbers can heal. Your poem tiptoes thru the most delicate balance between cherishing memories & yet keeping them in a safe place where we won't dwell on them. Removing your poem from the realm of romance, this is an exquisite metaphor for how it feels when all the painful stuff is healed, but not forsaken (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
..... that insight you got is well worth holding onto Margie .. thank you for encouraging me.. read more
..... that insight you got is well worth holding onto Margie .. thank you for encouraging me ... (KEEPS) always, Neville
......... I like the fact you took time to visit and consider little scribble .... many than.. read more
......... I like the fact you took time to visit and consider little scribble .... many thanks JK