Satori

Satori

A Poem by Neville

Satori

 

As I sit and watch you


Re-arrange your winter shawl


I wonder where have all the warm tones gone

 


Then I skipped a bead and suddenly


Arrived at the conclusion, I now spend far too long


On these old temple steps, dreaming of your little harbour ..

 

 

© 2021 Neville


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

This is deeply beautiful... always when it's unexpected our awaking moment comes, and always unexpectedly we are surprised by the universe, in good or "bad" way. and here at your breathtaking ending lines, I feel lost love and regret, a sudden realization that when you were supposed to do a certain thing You were doing another one, I feel being a victim of time, something out of hands. I don't know but these lines touch me real inside.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago


How very kind you are my friend .. The G Girls words and thoughts are very much appreciated .. read more



Reviews

This is so sad...her shawl rearranged, he watches her in his dreams.
She is gone and the water is really cold in the harbor.
there are warm tones in the memory of a lost love one, but are they really strong enough to warm us?
I don't know.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago


the fact you were able to feel my words so clearly was sufficiently encouraging and more tha.. read more
A moment of awakening, when everything seems lucid. I felt a shiver. I felt loss here. I also tasted salt. You were by the sea, harbours are fascinating places. Too much time dreaming means you are not living in the present , you are living in the past. That's where you took me with these touching lines. Good to find you back here Neville.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago


.............. if these words took you there, then I shall consider it a win win .. nowt lik.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Week Ago

You know Neville, I read these lines again, twice today slowly, and have to say I felt truly enligh.. read more
Neville

1 Week Ago


what a delightfully uplifting & thoughtful update.. thank you Chris .. will keep fingers cro.. read more
This is deeply beautiful... always when it's unexpected our awaking moment comes, and always unexpectedly we are surprised by the universe, in good or "bad" way. and here at your breathtaking ending lines, I feel lost love and regret, a sudden realization that when you were supposed to do a certain thing You were doing another one, I feel being a victim of time, something out of hands. I don't know but these lines touch me real inside.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago


How very kind you are my friend .. The G Girls words and thoughts are very much appreciated .. read more

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

101 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on February 16, 2021
Last Updated on February 16, 2021

Author

Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



About
Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over....N more..

Writing
Mastication Mastication

A Poem by Neville