Just for You

Just for You

 

Just for you, my loveliest of loves

I would have you know

…

No garden or hedgerow

Shall ever do

…

Nor would all those

Leats, moors and meadows

…

Or any other single thing that

Lies, falls, floats or flies in-between …

 

 

Reviews

[Ankita Dwivedi]

you have poured your heart out in such short words , it's a hard job . how far can two lovers be to unable to fill that gap even with void , then what are the fields and what is the sky . Such a pleasure to readanother masterpiece by none other than you my friend , missed it .
with love

[Neville]

How extraordinarily kind you are my friend .. Many thanks indeed .. Oh' and take care and stay safe out there :)

[Ankita Dwivedi]

yeah , situation indeed is worsening again , specially in india , lost a friend and never felt so close to death

[Chris Shaw]

A second visit and very much worth it too. Really nice poetry here Neville. The sentiment is so well expressed. A little gem I would say for your readers.

Chris

[Neville]

you may neva know just how much that means to me our Chris ..

[Chris Shaw]

Well I am delighted you think that way :)

[mattavelli]

That's very sweet of you, Neville! :)
Thanks for sharing.

[Neville]

... thank you for stopping by and considering my scribbles mattavelli ..

Neville

[Einstein Noodle]

none will do ... i love your non-closed closing sir .. i had wanted some punch line or wrap up .. but realized your made it through the whole poem .. deep sentiments in simple lines and images .. love that closing style sir!
E.

[Neville]

cheers Gene ... and please forgive my late response ... the Cafe is doing strange things again ...

N:)

[Einstein Noodle]

strangeness does have a way of coming and going :)

[Neville]

............ indubitably but nevertheless, also very strange :)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a tender sweet sentiment for the loviest of loves

[Neville]

................... thank you kindly PB ........... N :)

[Nix is typing...]

Oh, Neville! This was such an endearing and beautiful poem, dear friend! Thank you for sharing your pretty sweet thoughts with us ;)

Kindly, Nix ❤️️

[Neville]

Thank you ever so kindly and true ..

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I see you are still here and doesn't my heart appreciate that some things are timeless!

[Neville]

................... Bless ya my GWQ & truly ..

[lightsong]

for this gem Mr. Neville, You have my heart... how "true" sometimes You surprise me with these unexpected gems.

[Neville]

................... what a gemtastic thing .. thanks a zillion my friend ....

[lightsong]

"gemtastic" I will steal this into a poem Mr. Neville ;)

[Neville]

......... now wouldn't that be something :)

[lightsong]

true true... ;)

[Robert Trakofler]

I don't think that they can fashion a barrier that could withstand your heart, Mr. Nev!

[Neville]

................ sweet talkin aint my fing .. but you just made my harp go zing .............. cheers BB Brother ......................

:)

[Chris Shaw]

How beautiful. You are addressing a love it seems who is no longer on this earthly plane. She certainly appears to be on a celestial pedestal while all the others that you may have given a nod to here are lost in shadow. Wonderful imagery dear Neville.

Brevity of words allows the mind to wander so much more. Plays with the emotions, this one does.

Chris

[Neville]

way too kind you are and true .. I gotta go now .. so thanks & toodle-oo :)

[Chris Shaw]

you are dancing with rhyme:))

[Neville]

I believe it is still legal ........................
:)

[Chris Shaw]

Ha! It's a crime in the books of some ya know :))