Upon Reflection

Upon Reflection

 

I am but

an old mirror cracked

Can you see

Your broken self in me …

 

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Brief but heavy, this one. Perhaps horrible things happen when people unconsciously strike out at their broken, rejected selves seen in others.

[Neville]

maybe .. but on this occasion, believe me .. I know otherwise.

[Lorry]

Broken, barely lit and with question mark eyebrows framing a fizzog that is ageing in dog years mate. I hardly even noticed the cracks.
A lot hidden within the little in this one sir. Kudos.

[Neville]

................ Cheers Loz .. you neva know, you just may be write ..

Neville

[Cherrie Palmer]

Excellent poem Neville.
It's so hard to keep up with all the extra pieces once broken.

[Neville]

... I imagine you may never know just how much I appreciate you reviewing me today ... many thanks indeed Cherrie P ...

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) well it is always a pleasure to see what you are up to.