Cactus Days

Cactus Days

A Poem by Neville

Cactus Days

 

He said

You smell like a rose

She said

You know your plants ..

 

He said

I’m great on

Suck you lants ..

 

F**k off then

She indignantly replied

I hardly bloomin know ya ..

© 2021 Neville


Author's Note

Neville

................ a bit tongue in cheek .... maybe

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Ah the genus cacti; rather like some people I know, prickly on the outside, soft and succulent on the inside.

Try some prickly pear, delicious. :))

Beccy.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Neville

1 Month Ago


Thank you Beccy a very much appreciated visit my friend ... I am in fact quite partial to a .. read more
Kinda prickly, ain't she? Somehow, I think she may not have smelled all that rosy. Well, I guess cacti can save a man in a desert, sexual or otherwise.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Neville

1 Month Ago


Cheers our Sam .. Many thanks for visiting & considering these words my friend ... N :)
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I swear I was expecting the next rhyme to be pants.
Head up m'laddie, can't win 'em all. 😊

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Neville

1 Month Ago


... Tell me about it .. ta Loz n truly :)
Better to be a Cactus of the Four Winds...
free as a whistle and lovely as a Thistle...
gently, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago



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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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