A Taste of Hunger

A Taste of Hunger

A Poem by Neville

A Taste of Hunger

 

None of my walls are straight


So why


on earth should I be straight


with you


Go on, tell me, tell me do ..


I live in a crooked world


of the most acute offset lines


and flawed masonry ..


So why should I pretend to


subscribe


to such technical lineography


Go on ..


Tell me, tell me, tell me do ..


why am I still so


very hurt and oh’ so very hungry ..


 

 

© 2021 Neville


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I did enjoyed these words my friend. Honest, hard and direct. My favorite.
"I live in a crooked world
of the most acute offset lines
and flawed masonry ..
So why should I pretend to
subscribe
to such technical lineography
Go on"
I did liked the above lines. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thanks for the thumbs up my friend .. much appreciated :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.



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Another fine write to ponder on Neville. We do live in a obscured world.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


... Thanking you my friend and truly :)
I did enjoyed these words my friend. Honest, hard and direct. My favorite.
"I live in a crooked world
of the most acute offset lines
and flawed masonry ..
So why should I pretend to
subscribe
to such technical lineography
Go on"
I did liked the above lines. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thanks for the thumbs up my friend .. much appreciated :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
flawed masonry. I feel that today. unlike the poem there is no happy in it - but your words are lovely and I read this over and over...just lingering in a moment different than my surroundings.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I am honoured by your visit and truly grateful to you for considering these words my friend .. read more
You post some really powerful poems lately dear Neville, the last two lines brought it to the max, a very well written piece my friend, and this one has more depth of Neville's touch and his world.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Thank you G Girl.. you may never know how much your visits mean to me .. Neville :)
lightsong

2 Years Ago

just knock when You need and I am here :)
Neville

2 Years Ago


................ Bless you my friend :)
Just keep telling it like it is brother ... just keep writing! :) .. the honesty and humility in this poem are its one two punches says i! Belated Happy Father's Day by the way. Slainte mhath!
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


... Cheers Gene my brother and back at you ..

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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