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Essence of You

Essence of You

A Poem by Neville
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Essence of You

 


He wants to breathe


deeply


Every breath she exhales


To billow


and dance freely


Like those


wind filled silk sails ….


Like clouds


in a cloudless sky


Filled


with nothing but blue


He wants to breathe


deeply


The very essence of you …

 

 

 

© 2021 Neville


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"He wants to breathe
deeply
The very essence of you …"

Your writing is sensual, and I could feel that it's not just about the attraction between two lovers, it's a deeper emotion and you put that in light. Love is described so intensely, and every word made me truly want to read more like this one. -Bianca

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


I must say, I think you have just made my evening .. thank you so much Bianca2000 :)



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"He wants to breathe
deeply
The very essence of you …"

Your writing is sensual, and I could feel that it's not just about the attraction between two lovers, it's a deeper emotion and you put that in light. Love is described so intensely, and every word made me truly want to read more like this one. -Bianca

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


I must say, I think you have just made my evening .. thank you so much Bianca2000 :)
dear Neville... a beautiful poem that takes your breath
and breathes the essence from your laugh and mixes it
with a bit of tears... to make a "toast" to living in the now...
tenderly, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


I have absolutely no reservations about drinking to that me luverly Pat .. accept this littl.. read more
this is really good Neville.. simply sweet..

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


thank you my friend .. so very much appreciated :)
olla

1 Month Ago

you have such a way with rhyme.. I wish I were half as good.. one or two lines is the best I can mus.. read more
Ahh now that is love and romance. To be filled and consumed with the essence of the very person you are with. To feel who the are entwined deep within your being

I loved this poem from line one to the last line. It is like taking a trip into ones very self and allowing the spirit to combine with our own.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


you are far too kind .. thank you though :)

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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