My Lotus and Me

My Lotus and Me

 

British racing green

and

number seventeen

Very

nearly number one

though ..

Once upon a moment

gone ..

Or so it did Zen

almost seem to me ..

But listen

and loudly

That tree when falling

never made

a single sound …………

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This has to be about a racing car and a tree falling on it. If you owned that lotus and lost it, how unfortunate. However it could mean something else entirely. There is always that element of intrigue in your writing Neville. You can never be quite sure as a reader which path to take. Mystery keeps the mind alive. Happy Saturday:)

Chris

[Neville]

I could spill the beans .. but then, I would be forced to ..................................... N :)

[Chris Shaw]

There you go again :).......

[Tom]

' British racing green ' .. would luv me a lotus, even at the risk of a falling tree, I'd tour the country and pretend I'm Sterling Moss ..

Nice one Neville!!

[Neville]

... Now there's a blast from the proverbial past .. Great to see you here mate, thanks for checking in .. Stay safe & seasons finest to ya ............. N

[lightsong]

your Lotus whispers some really wise thoughts to You dear N, after all Lotuses are divine and wise, even when she seems to be losing all her petals but one left, wining isn't much important when when we lose ourselves, and the real strength comes that when we fall, we fall alone without making a fuss about it that no one actually notices that, and then we rise and we rise alone and silently... the real strength comes when we do all that alone by ourselves.

[Neville]

how write and kind you are to notice such things my friend .. many of my most sincerest thanks G Girl ........................ N

[Robert Trakofler]

This sounds a lot like my poetry I write it and nary a sound occurs LOL I write for the zen of it and my keyboard taps are often soundless yet here I am tapping away yet again my friend I heard the tree but then again I'm used to silent smashing my clever friend

[Neville]

every now and zen you doo bring a smile to this old fella's face Robert ... I also hear you have not been well lately, so just you listen up, lighten up and and get well asap ....................... N x

[barleygirl]

Quite possibly, this poem has not been reviewed yet becuz others (like me) are googling, trying to figure out if you're writing about a flower, a vehicle, or a heating pad? But I will have to place my bet at the race track! Here's a little chin tickle as my consolation if you don't win (((HUGS)))

[Neville]

.. you could just be write ... maybe thank you & please accept my sincere apologies on this late response .. I have grown accustomed to no longer checking my mail ..................... N