Slaves of Eros

Slaves of Eros

A Poem by Neville

Slaves of Eros

 


Dear lord, how we once loved to feel


those chains


that then bound us so tightly ..


And how we each


then longed to remain slaves of Eros ..


Yet despite all


of the pleasures that each link


then afforded ..


It was simply just never enough ..


Since we all still


needed an ache, or some form


of discomfort


and pain to remind us, and yes,


to serve as a


measure to somehow determine


our place and


position, plus the state of our


balance and


the grip we each maintained on


that tightrope


we all once called, love, lust and life ..

 

 

© 2022 Neville


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Wow! This one runs deep. I see You are expressing love from all its sides. Light and dark. pain and pleasure. lust and pure. the survival emotions of pain, lost, fear, lust.... etc we subject on ourselves so we might refill "us" with love and life. This is very profound Neville. Amazing!

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Neville

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I have said it so many times before but, it's true .. You are far too generous and my thank.. read more
lightsong

1 Year Ago

Neville is sincerely and generously welcome ✨



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So....does the pain of love validate the reality of love? Interesting. It is similar to, "pinch me so I know it's real?" I read this a few times to get the gist of it. So many have been a slave to love and sex to the point that it becomes their identify. Who doesn't like to be loved? We pine for it when we don't have it. It is a necessity of life for many. This one made me think. I truly enjoyed this, Neville. Nice work! Temp

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Neville

1 Year Ago


its the occasional comment like yours my friend that make it so easy to carry on scribbling .. read more
Temperance

1 Year Ago

Welcomed with open arms.
Wow! This one runs deep. I see You are expressing love from all its sides. Light and dark. pain and pleasure. lust and pure. the survival emotions of pain, lost, fear, lust.... etc we subject on ourselves so we might refill "us" with love and life. This is very profound Neville. Amazing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


I have said it so many times before but, it's true .. You are far too generous and my thank.. read more
lightsong

1 Year Ago

Neville is sincerely and generously welcome ✨

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Added on May 26, 2022
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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