Just Another Shot in The Dark

Just Another Shot in The Dark

A Poem by Neville
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for all those who have ever felt used and or abused .. take note, not every one is like this

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Just Another Shot in The Dark

 


When there is no one else


and nowhere to go


I just want to lay here with you


alone in our secret room


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When there is no one else


and nowhere to go


I just need to lay with you here


alone in this secret room

 


Another Shot in The Dark

 


© 2022 Neville


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Two very similar versions of the same, with the exception of want/need and our/this. Suffering abuse in a relationship is the pits. Who wouldn’t want to find a safe haven for a bit of peace and understanding after the toxicity. It would be sorely tempting. Secret though? Think I’d do a runner. especially in a dark place. Keep it light and in the open or not at all :) These two stanzas can be read in several different ways I think and my mind doesn’t always work the way others might. Good morning Neville.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


sadly, many victims keep quiet & stay put .. I could explain more fully but fear there is in.. read more



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Two very similar versions of the same, with the exception of want/need and our/this. Suffering abuse in a relationship is the pits. Who wouldn’t want to find a safe haven for a bit of peace and understanding after the toxicity. It would be sorely tempting. Secret though? Think I’d do a runner. especially in a dark place. Keep it light and in the open or not at all :) These two stanzas can be read in several different ways I think and my mind doesn’t always work the way others might. Good morning Neville.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


sadly, many victims keep quiet & stay put .. I could explain more fully but fear there is in.. read more

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Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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