When All Said and Done it’s All Over

When All Said and Done it’s All Over

I regret

to inform you

I am no

longer the man

you once

wanted or loved

am I darling ..

I don’t

have a clue

what happened

to us,

or for that matter

to me ..

It just seemed to

happen

and came out of

the blue ..

Like a stab in the

back and

a kidney punch,

all rolled into one ..

Reviews

[FGFRANKLIN]

Like the grazing bull once observed, It's time to move on to greener pastures. Or at least find a refuge not circled in electric fence or barbed wire. Relationships can make us feel trapped and duped as well. We can only hope everyone finds their happy place in the end. But I know there's things worse than loneliness and one of them is constant frustration. Sometimes we have to cut our losses and move along. I enjoyed the read. F.

[Neville]

thank you Fabian, it was a pleasure putting it all together .. N

[John the Baptist]

Liked the full bore frankness of the last lines. Much more honest than "Somehow we just grew apart."

[Neville]

electricity is not the only thing that's shocking is it .. the speed with which so many things occur are are also surprisingly swift .. thank you for those encouragingly kind words sir .. Neville

[Tom]

Sometimes it's gradual while others times like a bolt out the blue, either way though, when loves breaks down it's gonna hurt as parting an envitable consequence...

Nice one Neville, comes from the heart and next to word of mouth that's always the most sincerest form of expression!!!

[Neville]

thanks a bundle Tom .. sometimes my imagination gets the better of me and the pen simply takes over .. N

[Ken Simm.]

Oh yes. It happens all to often. when things are coming to an end but each cannot see it clearly yet. I seriously empathise with this write.
For information. I am usually the last to work it out.
That is because niave is my middle name.

[Neville]

What a magnificent coincidence .. her middle name was Niaveette .. cheers Ken .. Neville

[Ken Simm.]

My middle name was usually gullible but I thought I'd change it for a while. Because someone told me gullible was not in the dictionary.

[hiren]

Backstab?? Remember 2016, 2020, our paths never crossed 50 yr commitment breaking someone’s home and saying I can’t be without you, now again committing to a divorcee who was x cheat of you, how long this will go. Now you have spoiled two people life, karma has doubled. Who cares you , I know my space you approached me, you just cheated me that’s is the backstab. It’s my stupidity till yesterday I have been loving you writing about you suddenly you flashed with second backstab. Don’t think IPC will Giv no punishment you will be punished under god. If you feel innocent then correct your mistake.

[Ken e Bujold]

From experience: he is usually the last to know. and poetic he's definitely bring up the rear being so busy smelling roses everywhere. This little gem should serve as reminder to all us hymns ... kneeling at the hem of a her is a daily obligation .. or there won't be an absolution

ken

[Neville]

and there was me, thinking it was just me .. cheers Ken e B ... Neville

[Lorry]

Ah, when opinions change and the story begins with "it's not you, it's me" about a hundred times out of a hundred it usually means it is you, in my experience at least.
If it then goes on to say that they need more space, then exactly how much space isn't defined, at least until you realise that it is exactly the length, breadth and height of the space you took up in their lives!
A handy hint in these scenarios is, if it also involves a new hairdo, just interrupt them and tell them you're leaving them!
It doesn't change the ending, but you can at least fool yourself into feeling better about it! 😊

[Neville]

Thanks Loz, just wot I needed .. ta mate 🙂💛👍x

[Lorry]

But dagnabbit, it always does turn out to be me! 😊