The Not so Brave Man

The Not so Brave Man

A Poem by Neville
"

Another 'fraikhu' folks....trying to be something it never will be

"

The Not so Brave Man

 

I am not the brave man you

Once took me for

 I am truly frightened to let you go

© 2018 Neville


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This is packed with meaning & feeling for such a fleeting idea! Your words fill me with the way it can be when afraid of letting go . . . (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

Fondly does it for me Margie, bless ya again.......N
what a sweet poem my friend

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

thank you sette, much appreciated......
sette

1 Year Ago

you are most welcome
short and sweet, much love.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

I can almost feel it........................
Aww, that is lovely ♥ positively romantic

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

I'm just an old fashioned kinda guy.......thank you Stella, praise indeed and truly appreciated....... read more
Ah! You really surprised me with Your ending line! isn't it what a Haiku supposes to do ;). You know my friend (fraiku) is a one creative word!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

It is indeed...my take on a fake, hence faikhu but you are correct... it is a neologism or new word... read more
I bet not every woman is lucky enough to hear such a confession of love.
( I see an incurable romantic in you My friend)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

Shh, don't tell anyone................
Mrudula Rani

1 Year Ago

My lips are sealed,🤔🤔 .
Neville

1 Year Ago

thankshhh.......Neville
Very honest words in this poem. Men learn too late. How wonderful a woman was. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for checking in Coyote......
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Nice use of words and you are welcome my friend.
Neville

1 Year Ago

Cheers my good friend, means a lot to me coming from you.....
Oh I love this. For so many reasons it's witty it rolls across the page with honesty and it is tender.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

Wow, I feel that I have earn't this blush.....thank you so much Cherrie....
Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

:) your welcome
Neville

1 Year Ago

still blushing....
Yes I know this feeling that these words bring to life.. Love can make the strong of us feel afraid... Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

A pleasure sir, for sure....bless ya.........
yes, that kind of fear seems inevitable.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

Gets me every time I look in the mirror...(lol) cheers jacob......N

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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