Dirty Margarita

Dirty Margarita

A Poem by Neville
"

Delicious...

"

Dirty Margarita

 

At first the three

Green olives

Threw me slightly

 

Whereas the

Salt caked rim was

Usually a dead giveaway

 

Forget fake news

Tonight

We are talking forgery

 

Right now tho my second

Dirty Margarita is going down

Far too fast and hard on me

 

 

© 2019 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
I made this one up, or rather it was made for me in error in a Bulgarian cocktail bar.. A corrupted version of an old favourite, but a version I now much prefer.. why not give it a try........ all rights reserved & please... drink sensibly... N

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Oh Neville it sounds delicious but i can't drink a lot I get too willing and everything for my own good I have been told but I love that title name for this poem, you are so good a writer and very creative in how your words entertain and make me feel happy sort of tipsy in fact like dancing lol I better quit while i am still on my feet -- a 100 on this one! ;)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

You are far too kind Sammi.. but do ya hear me complaining.. of course not.. Bless ya and true...



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A dirty margarita sounds great! I just love how you make this sound (in poem & also in authors notes) like the damn drink surprisingly seduced you! Once again, your amazing approach brings the inanimate alive! (((MUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

Bless ya Margie & (JUGS) to ya fondly ... :)N
Oh Neville it sounds delicious but i can't drink a lot I get too willing and everything for my own good I have been told but I love that title name for this poem, you are so good a writer and very creative in how your words entertain and make me feel happy sort of tipsy in fact like dancing lol I better quit while i am still on my feet -- a 100 on this one! ;)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

You are far too kind Sammi.. but do ya hear me complaining.. of course not.. Bless ya and true...
A forgery with strong spirits immortalized! Great title, intro and poetic tribute to “Dirty” Margaritas. Those two olives cause all the trouble Neville! But they’re so much better than fake news..

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

Thank you ever so much Annette and true... tis a funny old world when fake news makes the headlines .. read more
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sometimes life is like this...goes down to easily and we bask in the moment like chugging a cocktail...
could i have a third, please?

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

cheers sir, down ya neck & much appreciated so you are.... N
Sounds delicious.
I learned the hard way never to call a Margarita dirty!!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

sounds like you got what you asked for...mine was handed to me on a tray ... cheers anyway
Wondering Mind

4 Months Ago

Well, we live and learn..
Cheers
Neville

4 Months Ago

absolutely.... :)
Clever write. The mind drifts on to other things. I'm quite partial to cocktails, hence the mention of alabama slammers in one of my recent poems. . Have you tried sex on the beach? That's another one.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

I have never had the cocktail no .. but thank you for asking and for checking in today Chris... Nevi.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

4 Months Ago

You are welcome Neville. Good morning to you.

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