War a Senryu

War a Senryu

A Poem by Neville
"

Tis the truth I tell ya here....

"

War Senryu

 

Nothing good ever really

Came from hate and war

Except for poetry and peace

 

© 2019 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Dont ya just love em eh' these little wotsits..... or are they maybe a bit like Marmite... maybe.. N

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And that's the truth of the truth.
Yin and Yang seems to be imperfect,
Yet, Yin won't have exist without its Yang pair.
Hatred when dead would leave behind love,
War, when buried would give peace to everyone,
The magnitude of each obnoxious event,
Determines the magnitude of its opposite pleasure.

Well written, Neville.


Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

Thank you kindly Kay and true...



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And that's the truth of the truth.
Yin and Yang seems to be imperfect,
Yet, Yin won't have exist without its Yang pair.
Hatred when dead would leave behind love,
War, when buried would give peace to everyone,
The magnitude of each obnoxious event,
Determines the magnitude of its opposite pleasure.

Well written, Neville.


Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

Thank you kindly Kay and true...
so very true and so well said.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

thank you kindly my friend... many thanks indeed...

Neville
Kesch

4 Months Ago

war is so sad.... & not a problem
Neville

4 Months Ago

war is sad and a big problem.. but I get ya....
how true how true ..clever ... love the human foible element ... technically a senryu tho sir ;} haiku are typically about nature ... what ever one calls it .. this is one of the best I've read me thinks! its pretty brilliant says i!
E.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

Ha.. I changed the title and thanks my friend & true... tis for the best, see... :)))))
Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))) picked up my monthly cheap beer supply the other day ... going to put a .. read more
Neville

4 Months Ago

down ya neck... :))))
Yes the war- poets led the field and still do in avid description of its greatest horrors - you pen the coupling with peace and the brevity adds to the telling - - an insightful read my friend.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

thank you dear Fay.....
The sharp edge of a Senryu/ Haiku and you slay well

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

How bloomin kind.. thank you ever so my friend... cheers, Neville
I'm a marmite lover Neville, so have no problem appreciating a well written senryu. Much truth in what you say here. Poetry and peace, a good marriage

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

thank you Chris

N.
Very well said and written

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

how very kind.. thank you ... :)
yes, the only things good...and the poetry more necessary than anything in order to process why...
nicely expressed here,
j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

Thank you jacob...

N.

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