Double Jeopardy

Double Jeopardy

 

When you finish beating me

Why not relax and

Allow me to take over

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Yes, I did find this amusing Neville. Being punished twice for the same thing. Taking a good kicking from her and then beating yourself up into the bargain. Maybe she would find some pleasure in watching you do that. You made me smile and I wish you a good morning.

Chris

[Neville]

Thank you Chris, am glad this little scribble made you smile & good afternoon to you too.
read moreThank you Chris, am glad this little scribble made you smile & good afternoon to you too.

Neville

[Jb]

I may have had a different take-away on this poem because the battered often blame themselves; and this is well expressed.

[Neville]

maybe, but dont be too hard on ya self..... and anyway, cheers for taking a peek...

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This is amazing, I even smile as I read this three-line poem.

What amused me most is when people are punishing themselves and are thinking they were punishing other.
Double suffering, double pain, it could even be triple trouble on them. That revealed to me the repercussions of every bad action we do to others.

I like this intensive idea, Neville.
It gears up my mind.

[Neville]

I am absolutely thrilled to hear your lovely opinion Kay... bless you my friend....

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

My pleasure...

[Lorry]

A little bit of masochism never hurt anyone.
No, that's not right. Wait a minute.....
Red sky at night... No....
Least said, soonest mended? That'll do 😀

[Neville]

that'll do nicely .. after all, no use cryin over spilt milt is there....

[Neville]

and I do mean thank you mate...

[Lorry]

You are most esteemed welcome. Which is way better than mostly welcome.

[Neville]

bring back the age of steam eh' that's what we Luddites say...