Super High

Super High

A Poem by Neville
"

just a bit o fun

"

Super High

 

Hey Babe

She said

 

Why don’t we

Just aim for the sky

 

Bang bang

He smiled inanely  

 

Hell yeah

I’m already super high

 

 

 

© 2019 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
No clouds or other heavenly bodies were harmed during the shooting or making of this scribble

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Cleverly expressed this piece of gentle erotica Nev. - - - left me chuckling at your expertise. The word "inanely" did it for me.... could imagine the silly smile on his face as he mistook the suggestion..... ha - must read it again............... Fay

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Bless ya Fay.. sometimes I think you can see right through me.... Ta ever so much... N
Fay Slimm

4 Years Ago

Yes - you may well be right there mon ami...... and ditto.................... from Fay



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Sometimes things just slip out and then you realise you've said something which could easily be taken two ways. Men in my opinion are always on the ball and wouldn't miss a trick. No men were harmed while making this response.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


just as meat is, men are too... thank you for reminding me of that little tennant... N
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Pleased to say I have never contemplated becoming a vegetarian.
Far out! I'll bet these two are headed for Yasgur's farm. No need to hitch a ride--we can all fly there! I dig your groovy words, man.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

Outa sight and in the groove Samuel sir .. many thanks indeed for the visit and reassurance... :)
Cleverly expressed this piece of gentle erotica Nev. - - - left me chuckling at your expertise. The word "inanely" did it for me.... could imagine the silly smile on his face as he mistook the suggestion..... ha - must read it again............... Fay

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Bless ya Fay.. sometimes I think you can see right through me.... Ta ever so much... N
Fay Slimm

4 Years Ago

Yes - you may well be right there mon ami...... and ditto.................... from Fay

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Added on August 16, 2019
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..

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