Felt Quietly

This is not rude...

Felt Quietly

 

The rain on my thatch

Is more of a feel these days

And less of a noise

 

Author's Note

But ya hoped it was gonna be didn't ya...

Reviews

[Lorry]

I never thought it was rude Nev. I was just wondering why you just don't buy a hat... Or maybe you do live in a cottage and... No... No matter what I say, the double entendre pops up. 😀
I do love the idea of the sound or feel of rain on a thatched roof though. Comforting, as long as your safe under the roof and not locked out in the rain.

[Neville]

THank you Lorry,
tis a soft padding sound even when we have a down pour.... and yes, tis not so comforting if and when locked.. which I am often.... N

[Lorry]

Wow, we both managed a comment each innuendo and entendre free. Now that must be a first 😀

[Neville]

I need to check that slur you cad you...

[Lorry]

I Sir, am a scoundrel. I apologise most profusely for insinuating that you should tolerate such insolence. 😀

[Neville]

insight sir is a double edged sword... you scabbard.. N

[Lorry]

Ha, is this the polite story insult ever contest? 😀

[Neville]

it might joust be you halberd sire..

[Lorry]

I had to look that up. You win 😀

[Neville]

wun awl then :)

[lightsong]

I feel it's about imagination, while You are imagining or meditating it's about what You feel, no noise or sound will interrupt You when You are in total surrender of peace and tranquillity.

[Neville]

my thoughts and feelings precisely.. thank you for sharing them back to me...

[barleygirl]

Sorry but the word "thatch" bumps my imagination right into the gutter. Don't talk to me about being nice *wink! wink!* Rain on my snatch has ALWAYS been more of a feeling (((DROPS))) Fondly Margie

[Neville]

I just knew that was coming... so I did.. but it feels so good dunnit (DRIPS).... ah yeah... N

[kitty]

Nonetheless, it brought a smile on my face! Short and sweet these days so unlike the days of yore!

[Neville]

thank you kitty .. that'll do nicely ..

[kitty]

You are most heartily welcome Sire!

[Neville]

then I shall thank thee again and verily so....

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

doesn't seem all that rude to me. I found it very creative though. very nicely written and enjoyed reading this

[Neville]

thank you dear Kesch

[Eilis]

My innocent mind wasn’t seeing anything untoward...until you introduced the idea, ha ha. Well, we all have to learn these things somewhere.

Do you have a thatched roof, Neville? If so I’m furiously jealous. I don’t think they exist in America, and I’ve always wanted one. I have no idea what it sounds like to be holed up in a thatched cottage in a rainstorm. I imagine that the thick thatch would muffle the rain. Maybe it sounds like a waterfall or running stream. Now I’m very curious.

We had a tin roof when my kids were babies. A little rain was lovely, but a heavy one was like a bucket of water filled with pebbles being dumped out over an extended period. So, if anyone was sleeping, they wouldn’t be for long.

Anyway, I’ve rambled a lot and not said much about your poem at all. Sorry. I thought it was a nice slow ramble. Like a moment of peace by a fire in a favorite chair.

[Neville]

yes my roof is well & truly thatched and thank you for visiting this little scribble.. N

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

In silence most is felt and seen...wonderful words🌹

[Neville]

thank you dear Kelly, you are most kind.... and appreciated.. N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And appreciated us your work🌹

[Neville]

............. :) x

[Fay Slimm]

If you have a good thatch you will not need a hat but may suggest you need a hearing aid Nev...hhmm !!

[Neville]

excuse me... that felt good to me.. too good. :)

[Fay Slimm]

Ha - -- feeling just good is not bad methinks mon ami.................... x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the rain inside always has more of a feel than a sound, but either way...it is like tears on the heart.
j.

[Neville]

Cool, you old poet you... N.

[Chris Shaw]

I do know you are talking about a thatched roof here , and with all the recent rainfall maybe it has left you feeling a bit gloomy. I actually like the sound of rainfall. Took special notice of your author's note. The sun has just come out here. Hope it shines on you and yours.

Chris