Rebound

.............. words

Rebound

 

She is just like some  

Ricochet

Bad news and

Hard to catch

But deadly

All the bloody same

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

As law enforcement officer, firearms instructor and longtime shooter, I appreciate the "ricochet" reference in its most literal form. I also have enough life experience to see the metaphorical value here, the desperation that often drives a lonely soul to place him/herself in the most vulnerable position, not realizing the deadly consequences of exposing the heart again to such trauma. That's my take on this one.

[Neville]

thank you R.E for your most welcome and very detailed review of these words... N

[olla]

it gives whole new meaning to the phrase "she's a pistol" my mother-in-laws favorite description of a sassy woman..

[Neville]

Never heard that one before my friend, but have led a very sheltered life.. Thank you for indulging me.... All Good Things...

[gram linski]

aye, but I bet she is great in the sack, lol, it's always the dangerous ones that are the most fun

[Neville]

a gentleman never tells.. but I imagine you aint far off the mark sir.... N :)

[Terpsichore]

I do a good line in flack jackets, postage and packinging included. :)

[Neville]

I will take a couple of those just to be on the safe side.... oh' and thanks for dropping in by the way.... muchly appreciated.... N

[Robert Trakofler]

Ha ha I love it I cracked when I read this I’m still chuckling:) I know what your saying but please believe me I cannot help but to try to catch them all the same:/

[Neville]

Thank you Robert, much appreciated my friend..

[Beccy]

That's the problem with richochet and for that matter, reboubd; you never know the direction or where it will hit until it's too late to duck. :))


Beccy.

PS. How's the weather down west. Been cats and dogs up here since Thursday.

[Neville]

Thanks for checking in Beccy a much appreciated visit, as always.. It has been atrocious .. had to go check on something pink and flapping down by the garage... thought it was a rubber kitchen glove until I picked it up.. turned out to be a Jack Russell blown inside out... stay well, warm and dry the pair of you :) N

[Pryde Foltz]

Haha. The irresistible femme-fatale. She as inspired many a verse. This was great:)

[Neville]

thank you kindly...

[lightsong]

seems impossible to change eh? some people find it so difficult to change themselves, and unfortunately they blow like a bomb around others.

[Neville]

you got it bang on my friend.. thanking you for the visit .... and true..

[Chris Shaw]

This is like an echo Neville, but not a soft one that comes sweetly. More like the ricochet of machine gun fire, and that is deadly. Short piece, very meaningful and well written.

Chris

[Neville]

thank you Chris.. much appreciated...

Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Someone to avoid then methinks my friend.............takes no prisoners that kinda gal.......... good read as always - -- and true. .................. Fay

[Neville]

just words.... but hey.. thanks Fay..

[Fay Slimm]

Thought as much of course - your imagination is second to none mon ami....................