Just Another Bad Boy

Just Another Bad Boy

A Poem by Neville
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Meant more as a song really and intended to be spoken or sung to the tune of Marc Bolans 'Soul of my Suit'

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Just Another Bad Boy

 

She unpicked

The sleeves

From his suit

 

Then took the

Collar and cuffs

From his shirt

 

And put rocks

In his boots

Just to spite him

 

She said

He was not her

Friend anymore

 

She no longer

Loved him

To the core

 

She said

He was nowt

But a bad boy

 

Yes she unpicked

The sleeves

From his suit

 

Then she shredded

His jeans and his

Tie and his socks

 

He was not her friend

Any more he was

Just another bad boy…

 

© 2019 Neville


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Oh my, he must have been a very bad boy. I mean it takes time to unpick the sleeves from a suit, and even more time to remove the collar and cuffs from a shirt. That's what you call painstaking unpicking. See she came to her senses and just shredded the rest :)) There's no hell like that of a woman scorned comes to mind here Neville. A good hearty tune to sing along to :) Loved Marc Bolan.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

Thank you for visiting these words Chris.. thankfully, they are nowt but words, my imagination and a.. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

I enjoyed your bad boy lyrics Neville and the suffering inflicted on his wardrobe. I too hope you ha.. read more



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Powerful action shredding of fabric and rocks stuffed in boots gives a strong message to boys who are bad - glad I caught this one if only for the smile at her wrath................... a wow of a read and a few lessons learned Nev...........

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


One would certainly hope so.... they don't always though do they.... Thanks Fay.. N :)
This would be me. I pretty much dismantled men when I finished with them *wink! wink!* I love how your clothing imagery shakes the most surprising memories out of hiding! (((MOTES))) that float when sleeves are slapped . . . Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


I guess we are two of a kind eh...a multitude of thanks on their way to ya in the Boondocks .. read more
Very good Neville - a song in the key of life? Autobiographical? Just kidding. We lads have to watch our step. I guess if we're naughty boys we deserve a good shredding, not to mention a tongue lashing although sometimes the silence is worse. Or so they tell me! I'm going to have to behave now.
On the other hand this lad probably deserves worse.
All the best,
Alan


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

Hey Alan... thanks mate.. us bad lads gotta stick together.... Cheers and go well my friend... N
I would be flattered to no end for someone to take the trouble of tattering my clothes to such exhausting efforts... it must mean I was doing something right:) or very very wrong! but to elicit that sort of energy one must feel a bit humbled to say the least:) I do hope she gives him another try after having settled her frenzy in deconstruction LOL

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

I have slept with one eye open now for years.... and years and... cheers my friend :))
needs a spanking maybe :))))))))))))))))))))) bad boys never get to stay do they ;} down yer neck buddy ..thinkin' of ya!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

Aye and back at ya Gene.... too true sir.. they dont.... N :)))
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M.
This is awesome because I can totally see it. It's one thing to be upset and throw something etc, but this person is being so deliberate in their spite. That's realer than real.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

Thank you M your visit and associated comments are much appreciated, morer and morer.... Neville read more
She went to a lot of trouble seeing as how she claimed to no longer love him. :))

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

That's what I thought Beccy :) Although these are only words, something similar did once happen to m.. read more
Neville, I’ve found some women like “bad boys,” maybe sleeveless, too, revealing ripped, tattooed arms. They like to unwrap us, make us vulnerable, and see if we can handle it. The best reciprocate. The worst just keep picking and cutting... so I’ve observed. :) (Yes, I know I’m way off-course, but that’s my American mind at work.). Another good mind-bender from you, sir.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

I am more than happy with your deduction my friend and really appreciate you checking in... Neville
I thought all the ladies loved a badboy Neville. I mean, i seriously doubt it was my looks and personality that got me laid... Both times 😀
That is quite a lot of animosity that particularlady is collecting, and I've seen a lot of animosity hoarders in my time. Well, two.
Theyve burnt my clothes, tried burning me even, but to go to the trouble of unravelling everything so precisely, well... In another time, a less PC time, i would say that that b***h be crazy, but i cant do that anymore, apparently.
Did she skin the bunny before boiling? 😀

Ps... It's me that's going to the bad fire, you wereonly reading it 😀

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

Cheers Lorry.. what I didn't let on was that she tried to do all those things with a wee chainsaw an.. read more
Lorry

4 Years Ago

They usually just go for my face. Well, apart from that one time, but i don't like talking about the.. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


Double ouch... (:
'Then she shredded ~ His jeans and his ~ Tie and his socks .. .. ' How cruel is that in this climate of global change. Your mind moves in extraordinary directions, Neville, sometimes gentle, other times caustic.. and sometimes with a naughty laugh! Still making up my mind about this one.. but as ever, is way up to scratch.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

thank you for dropping in emmajoy... I'm not sure either.. N.

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