The Weight of Enlightenment

The Weight of Enlightenment

A Poem by Neville

The Weight of Enlightenment

 


I am almost too ashamed


to admit that


it took me years to realise,


the warmest


glow comes from forgiving


   and from giving ..


Still, they think they stand


on firmer and on


higher ground today than we


   ever did and still do ..


Oh’ my word, how wrong are

   

each of those fools ..

 

© 2025 Neville


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As an older adult male I have to admit these words ring true. It's taken me years to finally realize what you've so wisely stated in these words:

"the warmest glow comes from forgiving
and from giving .."

I wish I could have been more wise to these words when I was a teenager. CLE



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Neville

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Bless you Carlos .. I wish I had been too .. Neville



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I still believe forgiving is overrated. Maybe just cause I am a little younger. Forgetting might be a better superpower for me.
Great as always sir

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Neville

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I guess its those differences of opinion and viewpoints that make the world go round and mak.. read more
It was not until I grew old and late in life that I truly learned this. Forgiving is for oneself as is giving. They free me from anger and stinginess a cancer of the soul. They allow me to be happy not mad. Yet I watch most movies that are focused on revenge and violence and an economy that encourages greed and coveting what one does not have. A lovely write Neville

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Neville

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who say's its too late to learn the joy of giving aint yet lived proper nor to the full .. b.. read more
As an older adult male I have to admit these words ring true. It's taken me years to finally realize what you've so wisely stated in these words:

"the warmest glow comes from forgiving
and from giving .."

I wish I could have been more wise to these words when I was a teenager. CLE



Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Week Ago


Bless you Carlos .. I wish I had been too .. Neville

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