V.I.P

V.I.P

A Poem by Alex
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A short poem about dreams, dreams of fame and fortune, dreams that will never happen.

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My celebrity girlfriend,

the beginning of my end,

your perfect eyes,

a hideous suprise,

we are worlds apart,

so knife my heart,

I know you don't love me,

how I stupidly can't see,

that love is blind,

autograph my soul,

I want it signed,

to fill that gap, that pitch blabk hole,

your smile and wave,

proud to be your slave,

so I write this here,

a letter to send,

to my unobtainable dear,

my celebrity girlfriend.

© 2012 Alex


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I was not expecting this to be so good. It was entertaining, amusing, and heartfelt all at the same time.

It had a good flow and the subject matter put a uniquie twist on a common theme.

'to fill that gap, that pitch black* hole,'

I also loved how it ended with the same line it started with. It wasn't forced or predictable.

Very nice work.




Posted 7 Years Ago


Dark and sad but beautiful, great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alex

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Oh this is pretty good, I liked the message and wink in it...
Wow, well done talented one!

E.L.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alex

7 Years Ago

Thank you, not too sure about calling me talented one :D hehe glad you enjoyed reading it! Alex

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Added on September 12, 2012
Last Updated on September 12, 2012
Tags: vip, love, celebrity, girlfriend, heart

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Alex
Alex

Bath, Somerset, United Kingdom



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