Past Emotions

Past Emotions

A Poem by Alex
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Based on a night I spent with an old girlfriend at school. That's all I'm saying ;D

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We Lie on the sofa,

you leaning into me,

I feel your heartbeat,

my arm is around you,

protecting you, sheltering you,

your small hand takes mine,

and places it on your leg,

you lean into me more,

I feel your heartbeat.

You turn and gaze into my eyes

and I see yours,

glinting in the half light,

the palest blue,

we lean into each other

and kiss,

a smile creeping onto both our faces,

I'm leaning into you,

your arms around me

and our hearts beat together.

© 2012 Alex


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This is so beautiful, friend! I feel the emotion, sweet romance, such a lovely write. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alex

7 Years Ago

Thanks :D
Great ending, as you two sweet lovers melted together, within a shared heartbeat, This is beautiful, so romantic and well spelled.... love is heart beating together you know.... :) as within music you collaborate and do some jam-sessions ♫♥

E.L.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alex

7 Years Ago

Aww thank you, yeah love music but can't really play an instrument....but I can sing :D

7 Years Ago

Great :) you just love music.... it's enough!
The emotion is there. Because you are writing from a past experience makes this bold. I like it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is just, beautiful. It's powerful, it's emotional, it's everything a poem about love and relationships should be. Great job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


such lovely imagery!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alex

7 Years Ago

Thanks :D
Very soft and romantic! Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alex

7 Years Ago

Thank you :D
That's all I'm saying? You say so much more than a night's visit! Nicely written!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alex

7 Years Ago

Thank you, glad that you enjoyed it :D

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Added on September 12, 2012
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Tags: love, emotion, passion, boy, girl

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Alex
Alex

Bath, Somerset, United Kingdom



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