Bright Eyes

Bright Eyes

A Poem by GiveMeLove

Your eyes are beautiful
They sparkle, shimmer, shine
They shine bright like
the moon and the stars
In the sky
They glisten and gleam
Like a stream of cool water
flowing gently down a river
in the bright sunshine
The greyish blue color 
Reminds me of
sweet morning dew
slowly dripping down 
the trees in the 
morning hue
Your eyes are beautiful
They sparkle, shimmer, shine
They shine bright like
the moon and the stars 
late at night

© 2012 GiveMeLove


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Admittedly, my weakness for eyes makes this an extra special read. The description is flawless and irresistible.
Thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


Reminded me of someone very special. Very easy to connect with your writing. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


BEAUTIFUL! This is a perfect poem. I like the metaphors.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautifully penned...my kind of poem...SyberRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


something to get captured in

Posted 11 Years Ago


wht a great poem.....
i liked + loved = enjoyed totally.....
i wanna give u 82/100...this poem sounds really good..........
"BRIGHT EYES , I CAN DO EVERYTHING 4 BLUE EYES,
IN THE WORLD OF STARRING + SUNSHINE,
I'LL GIVE U SO HAPPINESS THROUGH THE SKY,
"BRIGHT EYES, LOOKING VERY NICE,
UR'S HEART IS ALIKE A COLD-ICE,
IN WHICH I WANNA BE FLY,
BRIGHT EYES, BRIGHT EYES ANYTHING ..4 ....BLUE-EYES.....BLUE-EYES........"

Posted 11 Years Ago


nothing like a sincere innocent penning of fondness..

thanks for the breath of crisp air

:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very sweet poem. Full of love. I send my love to you dear poet....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful .
You tagged this
Bright Eyes.
----- John

Posted 12 Years Ago



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GiveMeLove

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