One Spliff A Day..

One Spliff A Day..

A Poem by Nicole
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Short, not too elaborate.

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Clouded judgment so clear,
Hazy tears threaten to show.
Evil lurks, lights fade away.
Silence is salvation.

Close your eyes and open your mind.
See what is clear, but is never there.
Lack of oxygen isn't the problem,
Lack of being, is.

Evil lurks,
Hush up now.
It'll hear you,
Inhale and with no release.

If it be too much,
do not cower.
Nothing to be scared of,
Its only silence...

The remedy is to show no fear
Do not be scared.
Glossy eyes reveal it all.
One spliff a day, keeps the evil away.

© 2012 Nicole


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I love this piece = very powerful - the emotions that it portrays = I had no knowledge of the word spliff - and the last stanza makes me feel very safe after the emotions that are sent through the remainder of the piece

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is really good

Posted 7 Years Ago


Why aren't you proud? It's a wonderful poem, totally worth the write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nicole

7 Years Ago

I don't know, heh. But thank you. Seeing it said makes me proud.
Annabelle Lee

7 Years Ago

glad I could do that for you

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Added on July 21, 2012
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Tags: being, psychological, light, dark, hey

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Nicole
Nicole

Ft. Lauderdale, FL



About
My full name is Nicolette Garmini Elise Ramsingh. I'm a proud person, sure some of the things I do may be bad. Maybe even stupid but, hey. Its my life. :) I love my friends to death. And I'm just .. more..

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Snappin'. Snappin'.

A Poem by Nicole