Lo

For Lo I came up with this in 0.3 seconds idk how It sounds cheesy.. very cheesy.. extremely cheesy.. iGnoRe

Lo, my friend

Where have you been?

I've been looking through all

The twists and bends

For someone who's you

Someone like me

At last, I have found 

You finally

Under my poem

"The Maple Tree"

Author's Note

This poem is more dramatic than it should be

Reviews

[Wild Rose]

Not dramatic as I understand it

The search for a soulmate has lots of twists and bends
Until you do find a person who fits in with

We didn't meet under your MapleTree

Ours 'Maple tree' was the competitor's area at a grass track cycle race meeting

[Crowley]

I would disagree with the cheesy comment and the dramatic comment as well. I found this to be a well written piece with great tone and resonance. The thought of finding someone underneath a poem is wonderful. Never sell yourself short, this was very good.

[Kay/Hayden]

I do not think it's dramatic. I have read WAY worse poems by new writers and yours is fairly good. If you need help rhyming (Like I do) I recommend this website: https://rhymenow.com/ Have a great Thanksgiving!

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Sounds interesting. Keep finding and we all will have more gem from you... Nice writing