Who I Am

The picture of my eye inspired me..

 

A writer.

A photographer.

An expressive artist.

I am a girl with a dream.

And I only have a few words

To prove to you that I'm just

As better as the rest of them.  

Now that I’ve gotten that aside,

I’m a girl with a burning passion

That will never die from her bondage.

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Author's Note

The picture I used is an actual picture of my eye. I just made it colorful on Photoshop! :D I decided to experiment with the size of the font from smaller to bigger. I hope it's not annoying...

Reviews

[Ralphy]

You have some good talent, it's no problem competing with the others. The experiment worked, the fonts and eye made your poem excellent. my favorite...
I'm a girl with a burning passion


That will never die from her bondage.

Thanks for sharing that

[WritefromtheHeart]

Oh this is really great Nicole...I love the way you did the fonts...it's like you saying all that you are, quietly at first, and then louder and stronger...shout it out, sister ;-) Great job!!!

[mysticgmekeepr]

I love the eye, and the rainbow of colors. Nice write too.

[Imperfection]

Short but effective write.

I like the structure too.

[NCPanthersgurl]

Nice job, it's true. You have one shot to make that first impression on the reader, and it can make or break your career. Great!

[DarkAngelWriter]

"To prove to you that I'm just
As better as the rest of them."

I love that line. It's a Nicole Renee line for sure.
The font was great. I loves it.

[Marie]

Nicely done.

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I love the format and the way that you made the word font change to build up to the end..the eye picture is a coo idea..that you are seeing yourself outside the box..that was genius..i enjoyed the read..
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next..Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

[Kara Emily Krantz]

loved the way you enlarged the words; it added to what you were saying, and the strenght/their power. it's definitely not annoying. i love what you did with the picture of your eye. that's awesome and i want one of my own! lol

nice piece. a declaration of self :)

hugs

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

I love the pyrimid style of writing. A great idea and concept. A nice write, never give up who you are inside!!