Spinning, Stopping

Haiku

The world goes on by

While we stay in one place;

Live life to the end.

Author's Note

I feel a bit rusty, but I'm ok with it. Xp

Reviews

[DarkAngelWriter]

You sound like Gee. Have you seen his 'f**k the daily news!' on YouTube? :) lol that's where he says it.

Mm, okay, well, short review. Get over it. :)

[Rachel Cooper]

Wow. It's so simple. Yet, so powerful.

It's a beautiful way to look at life.

I also really like how the one word at the end (which happens to be 'end') is in bold.
It really make an impact.

[lauren emily]

This really makes you think. After I read this, I just sat here staring at the words you put down..thinking.
You did a really good job with this.
~Lauren