The Animal I've Become

The Animal I've Become

A Poem by Nicole Renee

For the Inspired by a Lyric 3 contest.



Am I losing myself

To the monster in the front of me?
Am I losing myself

To that girl who’s laughing at

Everything that I do,

Taking it a step bigger than

What is meant to be?

What used to be controlled

Is out of its cage now;

Let the smoke flow out

And the liquids flow down…
Because this girl, this monster is out

Of the bondage now of this used up protection;

I am now the girl on the other side of the mirror.

I cannot be saved by just swayed, cheap words,

Or what you say is helpful advice for me....

I’m just only taking a chance at being the

Wild girl in the inside of this good, good girl…

© 2008 Nicole Renee

Author's Note

Nicole Renee
I was inspired by the part "Am I losing myself?". I also am going to point out that if you don't get the
"Let the smoke flow out
And the liquids flow down�" or what the story behind this poem is, just ask me in a message. : ]

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Hmm... a 3DG song from a MCR song... interesting... :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

I love it!!! Only hesitant area for me was..."Or what you say is can help me�.." what you say IS? can help me? Did you mean something else?



Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on August 30, 2008
Last Updated on August 30, 2008


Nicole Renee
Nicole Renee

Anoka, MN

I usually write poetry and short stories, yet I always come up with good ideas for novels. I did have a long biography on here,but when Charlie deleted everybody's work off of here on Friday the 13th,.. more..

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