All Gone

All Gone

A Poem by Night Of Nyx
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This is about the past in general and all of the pain it contained. It explains an external and eternal war.

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I remember the pain

I remember the sorrow

But this is all scars unborn

A rose inside a thorn

A beauty inside a pain

Reverses of destruction

Stabed from the inside out

But this is only a memory

The pain is all gone

All gone

© 2011 Night Of Nyx


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This is a very deep poem Melissa. What is going on inside of you. I am glad you have joined me over here. Another storywrite member introduced me to this site. I can't remember her name though. I heard Kevin is going to increase the membership fees over at storywrite. Join me over at http://booksie.com/chicagolady55 as well. Everything is free over there too.

Lucie

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Wow... This is extremely deep. In a way I feel as if you are either trying to tell yourself the pain is gone when in fact it's not. Memmories still hurt and that's what I felt with this poem. You are an amazing writer. Well done.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very deep poem Melissa. What is going on inside of you. I am glad you have joined me over here. Another storywrite member introduced me to this site. I can't remember her name though. I heard Kevin is going to increase the membership fees over at storywrite. Join me over at http://booksie.com/chicagolady55 as well. Everything is free over there too.

Lucie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A positive reflection despite hardship. I like the way you ended it, I can see the inner self consoling the soul in some way. Nice poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Night Of Nyx

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