Unbreakable

This is a poem about a man and his wife. The wifes thoughts are in italics and the mans words are in normal typing. I've never written anything like this before, so i hope no one is hurt by this.

If I could tell you how much

You meant to me

Would you trust me?

Would you understand?

If I could I would stay with you

I would always be your man

 

My darling love I wish that

I could take your hand

I'd hold on tightly forever

If you could make amends

With this demon deep inside

The one that speaks these lies

 

If I could buy you anything

I'd offer you the world

My heart and yours forever

Oh please dont ever say never

I hate to have to go

And leave you on your own

 

Oh baby not another word

I cannot take much more

I'm sick and tired

Of watching you smile

Like we're unbreakable

Like we're so stable

 

So with this last kiss

I'll indulge you

And pretend that I dont care

But honey i know you're glad

To have me out of your hair

Now run off to your lover

And pretend you have no other

 

When you come home to me

This shall no longer be

Unless you realise

That these teardrops in my eyes

Are bcause of you

Our love went with our youth

Now this time tell the truth.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. It felt like a real situation where the wall are falling in and you can't stop it. I like the many strong statements in this poem.
"Our love went with our youth
Now this time tell the truth."
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[eatmills]

Nika, definitely an excellent piece. I like how it reads in such a classical manner; I just don't see that much. The emotions feel so real.

"Now run of to your lover" shouldn't that be off?

Anyhow great piece, can't wait to read more.

[Vin]

Oh wow! I love this! Very, very good :D
Does it have something to do with.....y'know?
Either way, it's awesome!
Good job!