WHY?

WHY?

A Poem by Niki Disaster
"

I'm drunk but i can still write

"

WHY?

 

do you do this?

 

To Me?

Honestly...

what did  desrve..?

You say you'll be hereeeee

you never are.

I"m illuminated

by the actions of your

words...what makes no sense

to you

is perfectly clear

to me.

 

Say what you want.

Mean what you say.

 

Truth is all that matters....

anyway.

 

Right?

 

I'll sit slonr like it's nothing new...I sit by myself self...

You're on my mind.

 

Come save me me,

You Won't

Be here...

You won't.

Hold me...

You won't.

 

I've become acustomed....

To being alone.

 

 

 

And you're alright.

With that...

Like my question marks,

But they go away

at least

when I ask them to,

© 2008 Niki Disaster


Author's Note

Niki Disaster
I'm sorry.
My only drunk writing.

it's yours

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Nice write, I would be afraid to see what I would write if I was intoxicated. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think it's worthwhile. There are a few breaks here and there? Were they intentional or were you lost in the moment? Poetry is the stemming of one's sol manifested into a mirror that we all must face. I say that you capture that essence here. I love your raw grit. Stay true to you and reap it's benefits.

Thanks for sharing this piece Niki.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Niki Disaster
Niki Disaster

Stockton, CA



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I am a 21 year old college student up in northern California, Majoring in English and loving every moment. Everything I write is personal, all stemming from my personal experiences and emotions. I t.. more..

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