Your Love

perhaps with your violence you show your love for me.

    perhaps within the violence of your thoughts

    or the hardening of your voice--

    perhaps with the roughness of your hands

    or the darkening of your eyes

    perhaps within the burning of your emotion

    or the coldness of your heart

    I might find an ounce of the love

    you say you hold for me.

Author's Note

A subtle hint at mature themes...read with caution

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Powerful. And disenchanting. Where is this love they say they feel for me? I know they're violent and harsh and cold and distant... but they say they love me. I'm sure they mean it. I'm sure it's true.. or is it?

Thank you for sharing. Never stop writing!

~Aysha.

[John the Baptist]

I wouldn't count on it. Get away from that guy.

[Nikolean]

As all should.