Romantically perverted

Romantically perverted

A Story by Nikoli

This is about me and my girlfriend and a big misunderstanding

One day, I was hanging out with my girlfriend at my house. We were sitting on the couch when all of this started.

A few days ago, she said something mean to me and told me that she "owed me a favor" since she had been so mean. We've only been going out for a month or two, so I knew that the "favor" couldn't be anything dirty or sexual etc

While we were on the couch I mentioned that I knew what she could do for my favor. She asked me what it was, but I refused to tell her because it could have been taken in a suggestive way. She bugged me until I finally decided to tell her.

I was planning on doing something romantic with her favor, so I wanted to be spontaneous. Not wanting to give away the surprise of the favor, I told her that we had to be lying in my bed. She obviously took it the wrong way and I immediately said "It's not like that!"

She asked me to give her a hint, but I didn't want to spoil the surprise (because in my mind it sounded awesome). For the hint, I said "We have to by lying in my bed facing each other." That hint didn't make her feel any better. She asked for another hint (because she obviously wasn't going to go in my bed without knowing my intentions). I told her "It's something that I need to say to you when we're in bed together."

She told me to simply tell her right then and there, but I told her that it had to be in my bed.

She finally agreed to follow me to my room. She was clearly nervous and scared of what would happen once we got there. Never the less, she lay in my bed and I climbed in next to her. I held her close to me, wrapping my arms around her (like we have done before). I leaned close to her and closed my eyes. When I opened them, I told her in a soft voice "So this is what it would be like if I could wake up with you in my arms."

I know realize how stupid it was of me to do something like this, but I couldn't help myself. My hints didn't exactly help her trust me either.

I am not a pervert, but I'm not exactly a romantic either

© 2010 Nikoli

Author's Note

What do you think? Am I a pervert, a romantic, or an idiot? Maybe I'm all 3

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What a cute little story! I really liked it! I really liked the last line because it really makes you think. You don't seem like a pervert nor a romantic, but an ordinary guy who likes to express his love for someone in a way that can be misunderstood by others. Anyways, I really liked the story! It was heartwarming and I enjoyed reading it! :D

Posted 10 Years Ago

i loved it it was so romantic and cute.
I wish someone did that to me.

Posted 10 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

you're adorable. that's what :P
well i'll be darned if somebody did something super cute like that to me :P

Posted 10 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on January 3, 2010
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