No More Choice

No More Choice

A Poem by Nima.Hope
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A poem for those who are procrastinators.

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Open your eyes

Look deeply around

You are gonna find yourself

Amazed by a scary sound

The call of duty

Tells you to start working

Don’t let these idle-talks

Keep you off from hard-working

You have to start

There’s no more choice

Everywhere else you have no voice

People are working hard though their hearts don’t want

In U.S people laugh sadly

In Asia they are crying badly

Walter White has to fight for life

 while living in the land of light

there’s no more choice

no more  choice

You have to fight and work so hard

Don’t be scared of being  avant-guard

There’s no more choice

No more choice

© 2022 Nima.Hope


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Motivational poetry! I needed some. As an American I might have to disagree, though. Most of us aren't laughing. We do our best to help. I'm sure some of that gets lost in the bureaucracy of democracy but I like to think we try. The choice requires no effort ... realizing it does!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Nima.Hope

11 Months Ago

I know people in the US are not satisfied with many things, that's why I said they are laughing but .. read more
An interesting poem and concept here Nima.Hope, I liked the repetition of “no more choice” which feels like it’s pushing for some sort of ultimatum of movement. Nice work

Lathen

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Nima.Hope
Nima.Hope

Vienna, Austria



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A Literature Lover, a bookworm, a music lover,mostly piano fan. I have been involved with poetry since I was 7 but now I've started to publish my poems in a website. I really admire you commenting o.. more..

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