Glaciers Around My Heart

Glaciers Around My Heart

A Poem by Arya_the_elven_lady
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This is a poem I made about the way I feel blocked from others. Or something. Anyway, please read and comment.

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This is my life; a cold, dark life.
My pain is hidden, never to be shown,
Why am I hidden from all that is known?

I have transcended doubt yet I am crushed with its weight,
Will I ever rise again?
It beats me down but I will never be broken; pain is all I know.

Fire, it burns me, yet it is in my heart,
I work with it, don`t fight it, it works for me
The pain is burnt away.

Away, pain! Out hurt!
The worst is yet to come.
But I am not broken yet; and will not be for a long time.

© 2010 Arya_the_elven_lady


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Arya_the_elven_lady
This is my second piece of writing. Please rate and review.

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Thank you, Kyle R. It`s nice to hear from you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Not as sad as its genera would normally give, but it did have a good conclusion. Also, your rhyming was quite good, helping the poem flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you, Ghost. I appreciate the review

Posted 12 Years Ago


it's kind of sad, but it's also a really good piece. (: keep up the good work, keep at it. you'll be even better by this time next month, even, if you work. so imagine how good you can get in a year. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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