First Flight

First Flight

A Poem by Arya_the_elven_lady
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A poem about flying. I know, I`m completely crazy.

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I am walking to the edge.
The cliff is so big, I feel my fear.
I come to terms with it.

My claws dig in to the ground,
soon I will try to fly.
If I fail, I will die.

With a deep breath, I spread my wings.
I am at the edge.
The height makes me dizzy.

I feel my legs push me,
I`ve leapt off the edge.
Falling, falling, fear floods my veins.

But my wings shoot open,
I level out, I`m flying.
Now I am in control, and I sigh in relief.

The sea speeds by below me, I can see the waves from far up.
Calm, I smile.
I am at home in the air at last. 

© 2010 Arya_the_elven_lady


Author's Note

Arya_the_elven_lady
Yeah, this is what I imagine flying would feel like.

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oooooooooh, love it.
I like your repetition of words and imagery is very clear.

Good Job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


You paint a vivid picture with words. Nice job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh, I simply love the feel of flying in a dream.. Your words give us that sense of expectation and anxiety in the waiting.. the wanting.. And then you lift us all into the air to soar. Beautiful, vivid write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice imagry and this reminds me of Eragon, from Saphiras(Sp?) POV... very nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


this has the most beautiful imagery and you have captured these anxious moments in a very realistic manner. i loved it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazing write here. I like this write alot.
Very nicely written and amazing imagery.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice imagery in this peice! great job! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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