Eased Into Eden

I want to be engulfed by your desire.
Enthralled by your touch.
Eased onto the bed,
and eaten like prey.
Exorcised of demons by your lustful intent.
Enraptured by your gaze,
and energized by your lips.
I want your energy to encase me,
and set me free.
I want to be enveloped by your body
and engage in carnal delight.
Enamored by your pulchritude,
and enervated by your prowess.
I want you to engender my staff,
and enslave me with your mouth.
Elucidate your intentions,
and execute them with precision.
Electrify me.
Encircle me.
Ebulliently, effectuate me to Eden.

Author's Note

An exercise in alliteration.

Reviews

[Alexa Apothic Red]

OMFG-SO hot!! Waiting for my heartbeat to slow from its effervescent rising asphyxiation... I just LOVE alliteration! It's definitely that English nerd in me... but naturally as you play with similar sounding words and sounds, it creates a lulling, engulfing and inviting rhythm. There's a great purpose to literary device as many tools/devices created by man were meant to make all things better... and this is not exception! Okay, okay, you caught me, I too joined in on the "e" alliteration!! I couldn't help it! It was too fun!

Okay, now alliterate about Alexa ;) AAAAAnnnnd, go! ha ha

[Nipplegrinder]

You are, without doubt, the most, bestest, and obviously brilliant reviewers. Hehe.
But, thank you for enjoying this.
Truly.

[Rosie Brooklin]

This is so beautiful and admittedly arousing. I especially appreciate your allusion towards Eden. Very well written!

[humbleServant]

I love this one!! I like you choice of words and how you used them

[Relic]

A creative and poetic way of saying let's have great sex. ha Let's see immortal beings convey their thoughts like this. :)

Nice!

[Nipplegrinder]

Indeed, my friend. Pleased you like it.

[The Iron Horseman]

I forgot to mention - I particularly liked these last lines:
'Electrify me.
Encircle me.
Ebulliently, effectuate me to Eden.'
Hot stuff. my friend.

[The Iron Horseman]

This is excellent, NG. The emotional content is very powerful and the imagery is vivid. And the alliteration actually alliterates ardently!
:D

[Nipplegrinder]

Thanks, Iron Man. Ha!

[barleygirl]

Amazing use of words starting with "e" . . . an unusual pick for such a literary dalliance. Not one of your "e" words sounds contrived & they all work together to convey dynamic action and intensity! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you, Margie. I'm very pleased you think so.

[Davidgeo]

Even the thesaurus is challenged by how you wrapped this one up.

You're an emotional masochist/vampire aren't you? (I'm really asking by the way)

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you. And, no.

[Lyrically Inclined]

Very nicely written, Nipplegrinder!😳 Never thought I’d call a man that! 🤦🏾‍♂️

[Nipplegrinder]

Shhhh. Perhaps you will. Tee hee.