Taste

Every once in a while
I let you in here
I let you kick about
Let you look around
Even, relax
Open each drawer
Draw each curtain
Taste my potion
Even feast upon
my finest cures
and tastier treats
I ask
when May I taste you?

Reviews

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

Love how inviting you are

[Onlyme]

OH, sounds like a one-way street this person. And no consideration for you in return. Selfish person.

[Nipplegrinder]

Not really, Dawn. It's actually about the opposite. The last lines are meant to portray an equitable exchange between lovers. I probably didn't do so well in attempting to show that. I truly appreciate your take on this, though. Thank you for seeing this piece in a different light.

[Onlyme]

Ohps, I catch your drift. blushes.

[Nipplegrinder]

No need for blushing, darling. I actually love when someone can see something different in my work. It makes me think, I made YOU think. And, that's a very good thing.

[Onlyme]

Thank you John. :) for being gracious and thoughtful.