Venom

A Poem by Nipplegrinder

EROTICA Contains Mature Themes

Her defiance
An aphrodisiac
An elixir
An intoxicant
Baiting my primal
Testing my restraint
She speaks with such intractable daring
Her lips should be slapped
Yet I long to grasp
her neck
and bring her obstinate mouth
to mine
And ravage her venomous saliva

© 2019 Nipplegrinder

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Koibito "Nickie" Kitsuy..

I really wish this one went on. I am not of the Brat type but I love hearing and even reading of others fantasies and experiences with those kinds of role not to mention consentual rough play.

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

2 Years Ago

Breath play is very fun with the right level of trust.

John the Baptist

Getting on the dark side in this one. The speaker seems into struggle and conquest, even fantasizes on slapping the lady's lips. Will settle, however, for a deep, forced kiss. Glad the poet cut it off there. The thing was veering toward rough stuff.

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

Some themes of BDSM are rough, indeed. This piece, but a glimpse into consentual rough play.

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Added on February 10, 2019
Last Updated on February 10, 2019

Author

Nipplegrinder

St. Louis , MO

About

50 year old Gentleman. I write a lot about love. And I write about BDSM. I love to write erotic poems. But, I like to think I do it in a tasteful way. I like to read and review the works of the many.. more..