A flickering desire

A flickering desire

A Chapter by Nishubharti
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The poem describes a small desire of a lonely heart .

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Confronting all hardships,
dusk or dawn,
a desire still trembles and stays forever on.
The heart concealing restlessness,
is there an end to the tears flowing on,
or life is just a suffering that goes on and on ,
splendid seasons were not a wish , real wish for love still flickering, though life has almost gone !!!!!






*senora*


© 2013 Nishubharti


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Nishubharti
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I like this piece ! To me it conveys a sadness of circumstances you may be in.. or anyone for that matter. .... "a desire still trembles and stays forever on" ...very nice statement! I am confused as to why the long last line..... it disrupted the cadence....but that can be changed if you agree... otherwise, beautiful !

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's short, but it's good.
"A desire still trembles and stays forever on" - lovely line

Perhaps the last line could have been shorter, or could have moved onto the next line. But it doesnt really matter :P

Nice reading it =D

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on January 16, 2013
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Nishubharti
Nishubharti

Meerut, India



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I am a lover of writing on different topics. Short writeups which are thought provoking, spiritual and support humanity , stressing on the real but lost meaning of life . Basically, I am a very sensi.. more..

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