Modern World

Modern World

A Poem by Nitesh Mahabal

When did you realize,
It happens too often,
Laying in bed awake,
With eyes wide open.

Your long journey,
From life to salvation,
Is cursed with them,
Dreams, hopes and expectations.

The sweet sense of attachment,
That feels so great,
Until when you look behind and realize,
You’ve arrived too late.

The only things that’s sticks,
Through you high and low,
Is always with you,
Your own shadow.

In the hopes of betterment,
You feed yourself lie,
Time keeps ticking,
And life just passes by

© 2019 Nitesh Mahabal


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Indeed, life does keep passing by. But you have learned a lesson about attachment. Unrestrained, it leads to heartbreak. And your shadow is not the only thing that sticks with you, especially on cloudy days. Your awareness, all of it, is ever with you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Tis very true. Life does pass by if we let it. We need to embrace it and enjoy all of its beautiful moments and even those not so beautiful moments that help us become more grateful for life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Great poem great flow keep.up the good work

Posted 4 Years Ago


i guess we just need to grab hold and go with what we have

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indeed, life does keep passing by. But you have learned a lesson about attachment. Unrestrained, it leads to heartbreak. And your shadow is not the only thing that sticks with you, especially on cloudy days. Your awareness, all of it, is ever with you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Nitesh Mahabal
Nitesh Mahabal

Mumbai, Asia Pacific, India



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