Pain

Pain

A Poem by Nix is typing...
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A poem by Nix and TS Ulmus!!

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Agonizing, hair-yanking, 
too many tears
shoot yourself just to stop the
Pain
The pain that seeps through the cracks in my heart
Insanity dances inside my head
A mosh pit of madness
 tearing me apart
While the music rages on
I sit with my head in my hands saying:
 “I f*****g love you”
And what do I get?
Piles of nothing and pain
I swear I meant what I said
I guess you just...forgot
But I guess it’s my fault
For believing the lies you brought

© 2021 Nix is typing...


Author's Note

Nix is typing...
Ts Ulmus helped me with this poem!! :)) (Pretty sure I spelled your name right this time)
This is our what? Sixth poem? We've made so many "CO-llabs" (I spelled it the way you say it) I've honestly lost count of how many we've made!!!
But of course, I love working with you and making poems with you, Ts!!

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A emotional ride in the poem my dear friend. You could feel the struggle and the need. You two did well. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


The love game, a minefield of pain and betrayal.
Yet it's a journey you go through to grow which is even stranger.

Posted 1 Week Ago


sometimes we must endure the pain for loves game

Posted 1 Week Ago


*For believing the lies you brought*

Damn, I'm sorry. But wait...... You're not my ex are you? So when did I lie to you?

If this guy is the a*****e you say he is, why are you wasting time complaining? Move on. And If you want the readers to pity you, print his letter, too to you so we can see who's at fault.

In the end: stop telling the reader how bad you feel. They don't know you so they don't care. Don't tell people you hurt. Make them hurt. Then they care.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

very intense, i feel the emotions pour out. Great write you two

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nix is typing...

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks, Kari!!
I appreciate the read and review and you liking our collab!!!! :)

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Uh, what can I say? Hi! I'm Phoenix (Nix) 🔥 I love writing, and I love getting reviews on said writing. Whenever I'm not busy working on something for school or reading, I'm writing. .. more..

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