Big foot

Swallowed whole
Drain me away
Delicately,
Brewing sea

Blood-shot red
Sip me 'til dawn
Awakening urge,
Melodious purge

Courageous beast
I take your power
Light me on fire,
We'll dance o'er the mire!

Cooler now
Softening storm
Spins me around,
Lost and found

Reviews

[TheElfPrincess]

A wonderful piece, with a nice flow and easy to read. It was the title that drew me and I don't regret it. A well written poem. I loved it.

[ALifeAquatic]

It is a sign of a master, when they can get their point across without over expending on the verbage of their piece! I really loved how this flows and how much punch it has!

AHouseOfChambers