Champ de Mars love

Champ de Mars love

A Poem by Nona

We could not believe we found each other

In the giant city of love and desire

Among thousand faces, streets, and windows

In smoke of coffee and smell of cigarettes


We did not expect our eyes to undress us

In shameless passion of erected souls

In front of tourists, pigeons, and tower

Spilling the clouds in a summer shower


We could not imagine how deep we cared

To keep the freshness of our kisses,

Champagne flavored with cheese and… stars

On the bare belly of the Champ de Mars grass

© 2012 Nona

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Wonderful write Nona. In know your write is about Paris, have you spent any time there. Never been to France. I love Quebec and would love to go back some day. The french cities of Canada have the romantic atmosphere for France. I love your style.

Posted 11 Years Ago

3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


Beautiful piece of writing! Your style, your words, they are so nice (I'm sorry, I'm out of adjectives)! Just know, I really really love this! It's a beautiful description of the scene and the feelings.

Posted 10 Years Ago

lovey dovey and cute.... i love the title

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is so beautifully written. Your prose is so elegant and this has such a lovely flow to it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Lovely poem with good wordings. One film 'an evening in paris' recollected in my mind. With wishes.

Posted 11 Years Ago

'Spilling the clouds in a summer shower'

i liked all the romance of this and the style of writing. fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I love how you touch upon sight, taste and smell to weave a unique tapestry of emotions. This is exceptional. Desire expressed as clearly as is possible. This is how romantic poetry should be written!

Posted 11 Years Ago

delicious, your words are a sense of crafted artistry, reflects the beat
poet era, Allen Ginsberg, Jack Kerouac, Gary Snyder..etc..when
interpretation is a sense beyond control, such as poetic possession,
your expression speaks of times, romance and soft facades,
especially an imposing, decorative nature of description, brilliant ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is very good. I like the metaphorical usage and it flows very well too. Good job

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am in france atthe moment x i liked this poem a lot x it was sweet, cute and romantic all at once xx well done x

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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35 Reviews
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on April 3, 2012
Last Updated on April 3, 2012
Tags: love



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