Change

Sun lubricant for love rejuvenation,

Sun light for aspirations, tense desire…

Sun beams for melting ice-cream

Of my heart, JUST SEA OF BURNING SUN

For kamasutra art…

Your patient tender arms embracing my delight

Your loyal loving eyes reflecting sky of light

Your waiting sensual lips on my spring-golden hair

And Gordon Park’s excitement

In omni-everywhere…

We will forget the rain of London’s streets and stairs

The frozen drops of rush will wash away from us

But I will always cherish the memory of change

In sunny Gordon Park, defeated my estrange…

Reviews

[krish]

nice poem....87/100

[Moon]

I love this piece ! You are very talented .

[Matt "Mickey" Denney]

I love and envy the description and vividness you offer in this write. While it leaves plenty for the readers' imaginations it gives much of an image of its own. Thank you for sharing this piece! :)

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

We will forget the rain of London’s streets and stairs
The frozen drops of rush will wash away from us
But I will always cherish the memory of change
In sunny Gordon Park, defeated my estrange…

..................Great lines. Amazing and brilliant lines. My best wishes.

[Revery]

A place, a time and passion are the three things I get from this. I love your style of writing and love what you did with this. It is slightly cryptic but that okay, it's what gives it, it's allure, as if only you and you lover knows the full passionate story. Great write. Nice to see you back.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I like the use of the language.
'Sun lubricant for love rejuvenation,
Sun light for aspirations, tense desire…
Sun beams for melting ice-cream
Of my heart, JUST SEA OF BURNING SUN
For kamasutra art…"
Memories and good times are what we need. A strong ending for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote