Wired and Lost

Excited

And sad

And happy

And tired

Dis-connected

To the world

And spiritually

Wired

To YOU…

And hungry

For mango

Orgasms,

for nights

of mystery…

Lost in the net

Of memories

Of our

Flash-ed

Stop-motion

Unforgettable

History

Reviews

[Neon]

Yeah .. Sounds good. It does work. The speed, the outlines, flow everything's good. I liked the beat of the poem... and apart from the beat .. I liked how you converted the emotions into the words to express your feelings brightly. Nice work!

[Nick.B]

Interesting it flows well, and very emotional(it has everything frustration, love, hate, anger )....well done

[Robin]

so many never 'connect' they may think they do or have , but when one is truly connected , every sense aware , time and space , collapse into this amazing story

[Jason Dyer]

Enjoy some sugar before this one? I also sense frustration... Definitely mysterious in itself though.

[Muse]

I liked the flow of this...like one long random thought. It was hypnotic in a way...pulling the reader along...start to finish.

[Igor G. Balatsky]

порой кажусь себе седым утесом
а ты приходишь радугой
и обнимаешь

[Michael X]

Such are moonlit nights making love on the sands of forever; memory that
continues to haunt with a sense of what was, and what could have been,
the sentimental value speaks volumes, of a love that went the way of the
sunset, was beautiful but fleeting. touching poem, sensual with a calm
sense of loss in a tropical thought, artfully invented, enjoyed expression :)

[Charlie]

good poem

[Revery]

Oh how sexy. Love it. It's quite a whirl wind being lost in the bliss of a muse. Enjoy. This is a fantastic strong poem, love it.