Who are you!

Who are you!

A Story by Nora

Who are you when no body's watching !
Who are you when you close your room's door and be all alone !
Who are you when you cry in darkness under the light of the moon ! 

I think you something greater than you show us  , i think you are so deep 
Maybe you will lie to me again tonight
but i can see the sadness in your innocent eyes , moving like waves of sea 
Just wipe your make up off and be who you really are 
At the end of the day your sadness not crime so far !

© 2017 Nora


Author's Note

Nora
Ignore grammar problems just read this with your soul

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I love it so much, this poem can relate to a many people...and your grammar errors are not a problem because it is a beautiful poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much , your review made my day :)))
Actually i have to say " ignore my grammatic.. read more
I love the poem, it speaks volumes. Makes you wonder why we try to hide emotions that so many can relate to.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your support 💖
Fanicia E.

7 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)
besides the grammar issues, I really enjoyed reading this

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Aww! Thank you so much
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CMC
"Who are you when you close your door to be all alone?" That's my favourite line of the piece, and I love how much it pushes for the person looking in the mirror to see how much depth and potential they have. It's amazing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Appreciate it, thanks
CMC

7 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
I loved it. The first stanza was amazing. It was a great write. Keep writing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


wonderfully wonderful.....great one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Aww , thank you so much dear
a message of acceptance of one to another with a compassionate approach of it's ok, be who you are
good write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Thank you a lot keith 😊😊😃
Well a provoking thought actually and a great message...be who you are....I loved it...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Thank you Surya
who are you when i`m not looking ,lovely thoughts

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Thank you a lot 💟 i really appreciate your review 😊
 wordman

7 Years Ago

my pleasure

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Added on June 19, 2017
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