My ugly brown eyes

My ugly brown eyes

A Story by Nora
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Based on true situation :)

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" you're ugly " he said angrily then jammed his hands in his front pockets coldly " you're so ugly " .
" excuse me ! " i gasped. 
" you heard me , I said you're so ugly " he replied " I mean , look at your ugly brown eyes ! , they are not even attractive " .
" Excuse me sir " I said with my forehead puckered " you didn't even see them in the sunlight!  , they turn sepia " .
" I did,  i saw them in the sunlight, and they are more uglier " he claimed. 
" you know ! ,you're too proud,  too damn proud " I replied then rolled my shoulders to leave ,but his voice stopped me
 " at the end of the day proud is better than ugly " .
I turned around again,  he was standing and his eyes bored into me .
" i hate you " i screamed , squared my shoulders. 
Then i turned away. 
" I hate you too " he shouted confusedly while i was leaving the place " I even hate your ugly roundish almond brown eyes....even under the sunlight "

© 2017 Nora


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Nora
It's not a poem, it's not even a story, but I'd like to share it with you guys

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To me, brown eyes are the most beautiful ever!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Aw! Thank you so much, Donna, that's nice of you ❤
The boy is a fool. Brown eyes or sepia are beautiful. Many good songs about the brown eyes girl who stole your heart. Old wisdom. Don't pay attention to people with worthless words. They are meaningless. Thank you Nora for sharing your words and the story.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

My pleasure coyote :)), and thank you for your nice words and review, appreciate it
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure Nora and you are welcome.
I find it to be a talent to be able to convey a significant social message by crafting a conversation this way. You've done a great job of showing us a disagreement that could stand for many different things in life that divide people. Brown eyes is a perfect analogy for any physical trait that someone is criticizing about. The ridiculousness of this argument is a perfect example of how obvious it is when people put you down for dumb reasons! (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Yeah exactly, people find a really silly reasons to hate on each others, thank you so much margie .. read more
story or not, i really enjoyed reading this. i think the one silver lining to unfortunate events, fights, and negative things in life is that they give us more material for our art and writing.
thank you for sharing this!

p.s. brown eyes are BEAUTIFUL. even without the sunlight.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Yeah, exactly, our negative things in life keep inspiring us to write ,
Thank you so much f.. read more
Persons with brown eyes are the most trusty worthy that is the usual saying and under sunlight they so beautiful too. It is not too uncommon if one see cat and they meant to see them as dog they will try. Thought provoking writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Thanks for review, appreciate it :)
The message I get from this is that people can find the most trivial of reasons to hate another person. If it's not eye color, then the hater will find something else, like height, the way you sneeze or religion. In all, there's just too much hatred in the world and not nearly enough love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Yeah , exactlly, that was my hidden message
sounds like he really did lobe those eyes,i mean he described them at the end,so he was looking close

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your lovely comments :)
 wordman

6 Years Ago

well,i am kinda nice,most of the time,lol
merry christmas
Nora

6 Years Ago

Merry Christmas :)))
Your eyes are a maze where I am lost

Maze are also ugly( for some A*****e) I like that eye you put in profile picture. I thought it was a real happened incident with you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Yeah , happened to me :)
Abraham George

6 Years Ago

and is that your eye you put there?
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